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Eat with a family
last week,i with my family went to the restaurant
and then the waiter came and said"can i help you?" i say yes,i want 1 Baked fish, fried crab,and a omellete,my family serve that,but the waiter came again and give me 4 baked fish,crab,and omelette,and then i said ,i can't eat all!,but i eat them alll
and then we went home with a stomachache

gue ga tau ya bener atw salah!!!!